I am walking with a girl who is my best friend. I meet my
friend at the mall.
Rizky : “Faris,
what are you doing here?”
Me : “Hei, Boy!
I am just walking around at this mall with my friend. What about you?”
Rizky : “Well, You
know. I am looking for a new laptop.”
Me : “I see.
Good luck with that. I got to go. My
friend has been already waited by her family. See you later, Boy!”
Rizky : “Alright,
See ya!”
Rizky called me the day after we met.
Faris : “Hello,
boy! What’s up! You get your laptop?”
Rizky : “Yes, but
i want to ask you something.”
Faris : “Sure,
what?”
Rizky : “Is the
girl who went with you yesterday your girlfriend?”
Faris : “Nope,
she is just my best friend since we are elementary. Why? Don’t tell me you want
to know about her?”
Rizky : “You got
the point! Can we meet up?”
Faris : “Well, we
can have a dinner tonight.”
Rizky : “Yes,
Sure!”
At the cafe
Faris : “Hello,
Boy! You come early.”
Rizky : “Well, I
was the one who make the appointment.”
Faris : “Anyway,
this is Elie my best friend. Elie, this is Rizky. We usually call him ‘Boy’.”
Elie : “Hi,
Boy! How do you do!”
Rizky : “How do
you do! So, I have been wondering since our last meeting if we could meet
again, and I thing my wish is granted. It’s a pleasure to be able to meet a
pretty girl like you.”
Elie : “You
don’t be such a playboy. I like bad boy, though.”
Faris : “Well, I
have a problem with my belly. I will leave you guys alone for a while.”
Elie : “Okay.
Take care.”
Rizky : “Well, can
we move on to the other topics, Elie?”
Elie : “Do you
like play games?”
I actually go the the front bar to refresh myself. Forever
alone.
this great friend.. i think this doesn't need an evaluation..
ReplyDeletethanks :) It still needs a correction tho
Deletei think its to many place, i suggest to minimize it so when you make the comic it will be more easier
ReplyDeletejust three, i don't know how to minimize it.
Deletei will try make another one when i have time to do it
nice... this gonna be a great comic...
ReplyDeleteI hope so :)
Deletegood job my friend :D,I think that's ok
ReplyDeleteYes, please look at my comic :)
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